I spent all day on this

**iDerrick** · 03-12-2008, 05:26 AM

My midterm assignment, due tomorrow morning.

Here's the model:

Here's the charcoal rendition:

Sorry, it came out kind of blurry, I was too lazy to retake the picture.

Constructive criticism please, I know I'm not done, just stumped.

**Ralath** · 03-12-2008, 05:27 AM

I'm... confused.

Is this an art project?

**iDerrick** · 03-12-2008, 05:30 AM

Um, you can call it that I suppose.

**Ralath** · 03-12-2008, 05:31 AM

What are you supposed to do with it? Just for show or... use it in your animation stuff like... make it dance or something?

**iDerrick** · 03-12-2008, 05:43 AM

>_> lol.

not EVERYTHING I do has to be animated D:

**Rightclaw** · 03-12-2008, 05:45 AM

Oh man, LOL. When I saw the first pic, I thought it was supposed to be a science project.

Looks good though. 0:

**Hessah** · 03-12-2008, 05:50 AM

OHhh is that why u said u've been breathing charcoal and needing fresh air? haha

that looks good! look so 3Dish!

<--- cant draws and admires everyone who can!

**iDerrick** · 03-12-2008, 05:50 AM

LOL, what about it makes it look like a science project? xD

**Loveless** · 03-12-2008, 05:51 AM

Too blurry to tell, lol. Looks good to me!

If you want me to be picky, I'd say it doesn't look 'flowy' enough like the model...?

**iDerrick** · 03-12-2008, 05:52 AM

Originally Posted by Loveless

Too blurry to tell, lol. Looks good to me!

If you want me to be picky, I'd say it doesn't look 'flowy' enough like the model...?

Ugh, you're right. The center line isnt curved enough, and now I'm too lazy to fix it ;-;. 7 hours straight and my hands/back hurts. Maybe I'll wake up early tomorrow and fix that.