poetry thread

ɹɐʍɟosɹɐǝƃ · 04-03-2009, 04:38 AM

thought there should be one now heres my poem

i once felt like i was drowning six feet under
why cant one stop my pain
loneliness is like god waving his hand over you and making u the outcast
even if Ur not alone in a relationship u can still feel parted from one
like an ice age over a million year course
could u imagine the silence in that one period time
the same silence that is driving me to the endge of this earth
which has curse many who have fallen into its arms
this silence has many forums
like a def man that has never made a sound
one can wish it could make a sound before all hope is lost
unfortunately this silence has broken between us
and my hope is lost i just cant hold on