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Old 05-23-2008, 11:59 AM   #1
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Well i was really bored last night during night classes, sooo i got a drift of an idea and went with it XD tell me whatcha think. Thanks !




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The night air breeze hits her rosy red cheeks and she blushes when he walks over to her. Her body slightly shakes with uneasiness as the clouds move along in front of the moon’s light. Her nerves play along with the bouncing rhythm of the music’s beat screaming out of her earphones. She inhales deeply and can smell the lingering sweet scent of his freshly applied cologne. Her eyes connect gazes with his. His eyes are sparkling crystal blue like the ocean on a hot shinning day. She notices his smile is filled with hope. She smiles back. He strolls the rest of the distance between them and stands so closely to her. She can now smell the strongness of his scent. Once he slightly touches her, his mark will be upon her, and she knows of this. Her soft glimmering lips parted as though she is about to say something, than her lips closed tightly as she forgets her forbidden words.
He steps closer and leans slowly to her rosy red cheeks. His lips brush lightly over her skin. “I have been waiting all my nights to be in the presence of your light,” he whispers smoothly. She backs up a few small steps and looks away in shame, knowing he now knows her inner secrets. His mark has been placed upon her bright cheeks, and now there is nothing she can do about it. “What has been done, can be undone,” she recalls out loud. He looks into the direction she is intensely glancing at and shakes his head slowly. “No my dear, you have made the choice for it to not be.” His voice seemed so soft and smooth under the cloudy night.
With the moon’s light hidden, she can feel her secrets exposed. Her mind flows through all her kept memories unwillingly. He stands there not moving, only reading her thoughts. He knows of her hidden love for him, but she will never know his true feelings towards her. “Now you know of my love for you.” She announces, certain that he had known before this night. “Yes, indeed I do.” He raises an eyebrow in concern. She catches his sparkling eyes and stares intimately into them. He let her do so, while lazily looking into her green verity eyes. She felt her eyes watering, and her tears ran down her darken cheeks and dropped onto the cold black pavement. He lifts his hand up to whip away the rest of the eye drops on her flourished face.
He twirls her light brown hair between his fingers. She looks down, dropping his gaze. He moves closer to her, takes her into his arm’s hold and twirls her fallen hair, than begins to caress the back of her neck. His and her breathing become together in silent rhythm. Her heart picks up speed, hitting against her chest. She slips her hand down to her pocket to press pause on her music player. The music halts and she feels deafening with hearing nothing except both of their breathing. She keeps her right hand in the pocket and gradually slips her other hand into her other pocket. She did not move after this. He moved his hand from her neck down to her bare shoulders, than down her arms feeling her goose bumps and her hair standing up on its ends from the chill bypassing. He feels her shiver recklessly. His warm rough hand moves down to her hips and he makes his way up her shirt. He slowly caresses her soft stomach and lower back. His mark is everywhere on her now, and there is no turning back.
She realizes that he was right she couldn’t undo this now. She feels his breath on her ear, and she lifts up her face to meet his. She finds his lips with hers, giving herself to him with no turning back now under the shattered darkness of the moon’s hidden light. This was only the beginning of every moonless night.
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Old 05-23-2008, 03:24 PM   #2
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Old 07-01-2008, 08:39 PM   #3
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I don't like that.

It doesn't flow with the story... >.>

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Old 07-02-2008, 12:49 AM   #4
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Well i was really bored last night during night classes, sooo i got a drift of an idea and went with it XD tell me whatcha think. Thanks !




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The night air breeze hits her rosy red cheeks and she blushes when he walks over to her. Her body slightly shakes with uneasiness as the clouds move along in front of the moon’s light. Her nerves play along with the bouncing rhythm of the music’s beat screaming out of her earphones. She inhales deeply and can smell the lingering sweet scent of his freshly applied cologne. Her eyes connect gazes with his. His eyes are sparkling crystal blue like the ocean on a hot shinning day. She notices his smile is filled with hope. She smiles back. He strolls the rest of the distance between them and stands so closely to her. She can now smell the strongness of his scent. Once he slightly touches her, his mark will be upon her, and she knows of this. Her soft glimmering lips parted as though she is about to say something, than her lips closed tightly as she forgets her forbidden words.
He steps closer and leans slowly to her rosy red cheeks. His lips brush lightly over her skin. “I have been waiting all my nights to be in the presence of your light,” he whispers smoothly. She backs up a few small steps and looks away in shame, knowing he now knows her inner secrets. His mark has been placed upon her bright cheeks, and now there is nothing she can do about it. “What has been done, can be undone,” she recalls out loud. He looks into the direction she is intensely glancing at and shakes his head slowly. “No my dear, you have made the choice for it to not be.” His voice seemed so soft and smooth under the cloudy night.
With the moon’s light hidden, she can feel her secrets exposed. Her mind flows through all her kept memories unwillingly. He stands there not moving, only reading her thoughts. He knows of her hidden love for him, but she will never know his true feelings towards her. “Now you know of my love for you.” She announces, certain that he had known before this night. “Yes, indeed I do.” He raises an eyebrow in concern. She catches his sparkling eyes and stares intimately into them. He let her do so, while lazily looking into her green verity eyes. She felt her eyes watering, and her tears ran down her darken cheeks and dropped onto the cold black pavement. He lifts his hand up to whip away the rest of the eye drops on her flourished face.
He twirls her light brown hair between his fingers. She looks down, dropping his gaze. He moves closer to her, takes her into his arm’s hold and twirls her fallen hair, than begins to caress the back of her neck. His and her breathing become together in silent rhythm. Her heart picks up speed, hitting against her chest. She slips her hand down to her pocket to press pause on her music player. The music halts and she feels deafening with hearing nothing except both of their breathing. She keeps her right hand in the pocket and gradually slips her other hand into her other pocket. She did not move after this. He moved his hand from her neck down to her bare shoulders, than down her arms feeling her goose bumps and her hair standing up on its ends from the chill bypassing. He feels her shiver recklessly. His warm rough hand moves down to her hips and he makes his way up her shirt. He slowly caresses her soft stomach and lower back. His mark is everywhere on her now, and there is no turning back.
She realizes that he was right she couldn’t undo this now. She feels his breath on her ear, and she lifts up her face to meet his. She finds his lips with hers, giving herself to him with no turning back now under the shattered darkness of the moon’s hidden light. This was only the beginning of every moonless night.

lol bold part just like wen me met ^o^
 
Old 08-12-2008, 11:15 PM   #5
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Old 08-16-2008, 06:22 PM   #6
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Well, is this part of something bigger? I don't really get it...
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