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03-12-2008, 05:56 AM
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Sucked back into the 'net
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It's not finished...?
Lol, DerrDerr, you sound like one of those people who is never satisfied with their drawings. o;
The only thing I see is that the left corner of the drawn cloth doesn't have the little fray/stitching, or whatever you call it.
Based on shadowing, I don't see anything wrong... <_>
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03-12-2008, 06:33 AM
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WONDERCLERIC
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You always say that you're drawings are bad and it gives me the impression that it IS bad, but it is not!!! You've been misleading!!!
I think it looks good.
I have a suggestion, not so much CC though (because I'm not good with charcoals myself). How about some more high lights on the shirt? Like these bits:
You can try and "rub" out some bits to high light it so the high lighted bits are actually white, and not shaded. I think that will help with the lighting intensity. But then again, the photo is kind of blurry so maybe you've already made them white but I just did not see them! xDD
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03-12-2008, 11:25 AM
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sane, so says the voices
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I think it looks good.
The only thing I would change is the shadow of the top right fold - the shadow seems to imply the lighting is more to the left but further down the image it appears that the light is more from the top left.
But that's just my opinion. It may actually be the right and I have no clue.
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03-12-2008, 04:17 PM
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Yank me.
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Lol nice shadows assignment. I nearly failed mine when I tried to draw that, and ended up with a 65 final mark, lowest in my history. *envies*
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03-12-2008, 05:34 PM
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lmao, charcoal. X_X I hated our charcoal projects. I'd come home from college looking like I was just in battle at 'nam or something, rofl.
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03-13-2008, 02:38 AM
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I would say the only thing I would change is like Loveless said...
the drawing seems so... perfect lined. The model is curved.
Other than that... I had to look 2 times to see the difference...
the 2nd time I looked, I noticed the line thing.
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