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Old 05-27-2009, 12:41 AM   #1
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o.o lolhow was hte first part a error? XD and ....... lol I never said anything about a Kaiki o.o

Thanks for pointing out hte erros xD I havent gotten to really re-read and fix some of them been busy.. and I hate re-reading it since Ive read it so much I have the story memorized.... and just recently finished it x-x

and I had to fix alot of copy and paste stuff from my words document and it took a while so I was irritated with it and was just like "FORGET IT" and went ahead nad posted it x-x lol I'll try to fix the paragraphs and stuff for the next chapter
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Old 05-27-2009, 12:42 AM   #2
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oh, lol, nvm ignore thatxD
must have been imagining things
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Old 05-27-2009, 12:47 AM   #3
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xD Rofl okay things like that happen to me at times too o-o I'll make sure to make it more legible next time, since withouth paragraphs and stuff its kind of irritating to try to read lol
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Old 05-27-2009, 12:49 AM   #4
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yea, wanna see the next chapter;D
this seems like it would be a manga
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Old 05-28-2009, 07:03 AM   #5
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Ó Chapter #1 Î



...........She stared around her, blinking. She was in a forest; an odd girl… or creature leaned over her. She looked like a human but she had cat ears… Cat ears! She thought sitting up abruptly, her back was against a tree. “Who…what… what are you!?” Kait stammered.




“What am I?” The girl retorted. “I am Alexia. I am a Zycho. Apparently so are you. Does that answer your questions?” Alexia glared, her blue eyes turning green.




“I’m a… Z…Zy… what’s-it?” Kait stammered again, trying to get to her feet, but became dizzy and sat back down.




“Zy-cho.” Alexia repeated, slowly this time.



As Kait’s dizziness started to vanish, she noticed the girl was wearing a white and purple ciancho, it was a light purple almost a lilac.



Alexia handed Kait a small mirror type item. Looking in it she noticed she too was wearing a ciancho, how she got it, she knew not, it was different. Hers was black and red; the part that was normally white was red. Next, she noticed a broadsword strapped across her back, and then… her once green eyes were now light brown and… brown animal ears. “What the…” She gasped, all went black and she fainted again.



Kait woke again and found herself in a small room of a house, she sat up abruptly in the straw bed, and then she felt the top of her head, and to her distress found two furry animal ears, they really were there.



“You’re not from here, are you?” Alexia asked walking into the small room, holding two bowls of soup. Her eyes had returned to blue. “Because you don’t wake up a Zycho- it’s not poison.” She smiled as Kait hesitated to eat. Kait shrugged



I’m already with an odd… Zycho thing, in a place I have no clue where, what could be worse, she thought eating a spoonful. “This is great!” Kait exclaimed.


“Thanks, its Rosehip soup.” Alexia smiled, pleased. “Oh! By-the-way, what's your name?” She asked.



“Oh… It’s Kait.” She mumbled finishing her soup.





“Well, Hi Kait. My name is Alexia, like I said before. I’m a cat Zycho; you’re in the lands of Zenear.” Alexia smiled taking to bowls to the main room to be washed later. Kait followed her, “what kind of Zycho am I?” Kait asked, just to make sure and stepped outside.



“Dog.” She heard Alexia say.





Kait sat down on a rock near the house. She, Alexia, lived in the forest; the house was made of stone, the roof of wood. “It’s a cute little house.” She whispered.



“And you’re an odd little Zycho.” She heard someone snarl. Swirling around with a squeaked she found two boys behind her; one was a black haired wolf Zycho, the other, a dark brown haired human, the one who had spoken. He had his sword pointed at her throat, only three inches away… she screamed.





“Kiba, sheath your sword, now!” She heard Alexia yell. “She’s scared enough, as-is. I hope you’re not here to scare off my guest.”



“We would never, you know how Kiba is. He likes to scare people.” The black haired boy smiled innocently. He carried a quiver of arrows and a strung bow on his shoulder. At least he didn’t put a sword to my throat. She gulped.


He also wore a ciancho it was black and blue. The normally white part was light blue. His friend, Kiba wore the same except instead of light blue, it was hunter green.



“Oh shut-it.” Alexia snapped, blue eyes turning dark green, of annoyance. Kiba sheathed his sword; it was a normal sized sword, a katana, or Japanese styled sword.


“I give up on you two. If you don’t start behaving, you’ll make me really mad.” She smiled wickedly.



“I don’t think we want that.” Kiba said.


"Come in, you too Kait.” She sighed, heading into the house.


“Kait this is Elric,” Alexia introduced him, the black haired boy. “And this is Kiba.” The sword guy, Kait glared at him. “Kiba, Elric, this is Kait, she… just arrived in Zenear. There was a loud crashing sound then she appeared in the forest.” Kiba and Elric exchanged looks with one another.



“What’s the matter?” Alexia asked.



“When did you find her in the forest? Three days ago, right, when the Big Crash happened?”



“I was out for three days!?” Kait gasped, sinking into her chair at the table, where everyone sat at, they didn’t seem to have couches in this world. Alexia nodded and Elric and Kiba exchanged the uncertain look again. “Would someone please explain what that look is for.” Alexia hissed.



“Three days ago someone else appeared. We know him Alexia, Yuki, remember.” Elric said.



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“Yuki?!” Kait looked at Elric, her now brown eyes wide with horror; she had hoped that her coming here meant he stayed behind.



“You know him?” Elric and Kiba asked at the same time.



“Do… do you know where he is?” Kait asked, her new dog-ears twitching anxiously.



“He’s outside somewhere; I refused to waste my time on him. Kept saying he had to go back or something.” Kiba grumbled.



A dark brown haired boy stood in the doorway, his green eyes bright. “Hey Alexia, sorry I took so long.”



“Yuki!” Kait cried running to him, she knew his voice from anywhere. Yuki gasped in surprise. “Kait?” He asked hugging her. “I told you to run…” he frowned. “ Now you’re stuck here too.”



“Stuck here?” Alexia looked at him, raising an eyebrow.



“You know what I mean; she doesn’t belong in this realm.”



Kait looked at him confused, “How do you know them Yuki?”



“I’ll tell you, let’s go outside.” Yuki sighed. Why’d she have to get mixed up in this? He thought sadly.





They sat down in the grass, next to a tree. “Well… I came from this realm four years ago. I was… escaping something, you could say. Now my name really is Yuki Batosi, and I really am sixteen so I didn’t lie about that in your realm. Before I went into your realm, let’s see I was twelve when I met you and left this realm. I was about eight when I met those two, Alexia and Kiba. Our village was destroyed when I was eleven, we met Elric soon after that, his parents had been killed too, and so we all lived here, Kiba, a human, Elric and Alexia they are both Zychos, and me a Shape-Shifter, in the Lost Forest.” He looked at her; she seemed to be thinking.



“So many people died when you were young… that must have been hard.” She commented, feeling sorry for her friend.



“It was harder for Kiba and Alexia.” He sighed; it was sad remembering that day. “I really wish you would have stayed back in your realm.”



“If I had stayed there then I would have missed you too much.” She smiled. “Ma will take care of MooMoo and Pablo and Chelsea will have extra time to work on their chemistry project, it’ll all be fine.” This made Yuki smile; she always acts so brave and carefree.



“You’re always thinking on the bright side, huh? Oh yeah, your sword, do you know its name yet?”



“Uh… it has a name?” she asked, bewildered yet again.



“Of course.” He laughed. “Even mine, a sakabato, or reverse blade, has a name.” He said unsheathing the sword she just noticed hung at his side. “The sharpened end is on the opposite side, that’s how it’s a reverse blade.” He pointed out. “My sakabato is known as Ryuu, or Hidden Dragon,” he smiled, “because this weapon isn’t used for killing.”



Kait looked at it as he put it back in its sheath, “I wonder what my swords name is…” she said as they got up to go inside.



“Hey, Alexia.” Yuki smiled walking back into the house.



“Welcome back.” She smiled, happy to see your old friend again. “Kiba went fishing and Elric…” She shrugged. “You never know what he’s up to.” She laughed, her eyes a bright blue. Her eyes must change with her attitude… Kait decided.



“Now, Kait you’re not going to faint again, right?” Alexia teased.



“I’m not planning to any time soon.” Kait couldn’t help but smiled.


“That’s good.”



“Alexia, could you help her find her swords name? To get back to her realm, she might need it.” Yuki yawned.



“Sure,” Alexia sighed, “It might take a while, we’ll do it tomorrow, and it’s too late tonight anyways.”



“That’s sounds fine.” He yawned again; it was beginning to get dark outside now.



“Your things are in the barn.” She said, noticing how tired he seemed to be. “You were gone for four years, the owls missed you.” She laughed.



“Thanks.” He yawned again. “Night Kait, Night Alexia.” He said leaving, toward the barn, that was only about twelve or thirteen feet from the house.



Kait sighed, “This realm is so weird.”



Alexia just laughed, “I guess it’s different from yours but you’ll probably get use to it. Elric and Kiba just came back home from off traveling again, now Yuki is back.”



“Everyone here has a weapon and their all, still young…” Kait mumbled.



“You have to here; it’s not exactly a safe place.” Alexia just smiled, she loved how this place was. She loved the adventures and the dangers and everything about it. “Your room, the one you woke up in, is right there, mine is right beside it.” She pointed out. “The boys would rather sleep in the barn, I don’t blame them but those owls are… well their annoying.” She laughed.
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Old 05-28-2009, 07:06 AM   #7
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xD My writing style sorta sucks but yeah itskinda simple... and it changes a bit as the story goes on cause I usually dont finish my stories and this one is finished. It took me three years to finally finish.. one year I just didnt wanna have anything to do with it lmao xD
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