Criticism needed/wanted ^.^

**Loveless** · 04-17-2008, 05:29 AM

First off, she's really purdy! Lol

Something that sort of bugs me is how she sort of seems like a zombie with the faded colours. >_< I guess it's cause of the original.

And her right eye (your left), the blue is a little off the iris so it's covering a bit of her eyelid too.

The tip of the butterflies wing is touching her lips and gives the impression of 'the Joker' with the slit mouth thing.

+Tequila+ · 04-17-2008, 05:34 AM

Originally Posted by Hessah

somehow the butterfly on the cheek doesnt look like its curving with the face......?

but i dont hv artistic eyes...

hmm you are probably right haha I'm semi blind when it comes to making things flow together.

Originally Posted by Loveless

First off, she's really purdy! Lol

Something that sort of bugs me is how she sort of seems like a zombie with the faded colours. >_< I guess it's cause of the original.

And her right eye (your left), the blue is a little off the iris so it's covering a bit of her eyelid too.

The tip of the butterflies wing is touching her lips and gives the impression of 'the Joker' with the slit mouth thing.

Yea she is o.0 Misa Campo ftw. I had faded her a bit because I wanted the butterflies to stand out more but if it looks bad then its something I can always change. Thank you for the butterfly part something seemed off and when i resized it everything seemed to fit better. ^.^

**Yosei** · 04-17-2008, 05:45 AM

I like the colors in the original better. She looks pale in the 2nd one.

**Loveless** · 04-17-2008, 05:57 AM

I'm sure you can utilize her purdy glow and still have the butterfly standout. :3 But seriously her facial structure is super nice... :O

Off-topic: My dog is doing her usual 'butt drag race'. xD

+Tequila+ · 04-17-2008, 06:04 AM

Still too pale? I also did somemore work on the eyes and resized the butterfly. As for the colors I dont think the original colors would work well with the eyes however but I'm trying it.

**a.L** · 04-17-2008, 06:21 AM

I think her right eye needs a little fixing. Maybe tone down the brightness a little. I've never done photo manip before, so don't take my word for it. :/

**Yosei** · 04-17-2008, 06:55 AM

The eyes look too shopped lol.

I'm guessing you're trying to turn her eyes green?

Flowersss · 04-17-2008, 07:21 AM

Originally Posted by +Tequila+

Still too pale? I also did somemore work on the eyes and resized the butterfly. As for the colors I dont think the original colors would work well with the eyes however but I'm trying it.

So much better...I like this one 50 time better. She dosent look dead anymore ^_^

**Blaaaaaaaah** · 04-17-2008, 07:33 AM

For the 2nd edit pic:

Her right eye needs to be adjusted, it looks like she lost pupils. Another thing that makes it look weird is the lining on the top of the right eye. It doesn't seem to be smoothly lined so it looks like the eyeball is popping out.

Maybe you can also try lightly shade her right face (our left) so there's a bit more of a contrast.

I think the outlines of her eyes are a little bit too dark too.

That's just what I reckon, I haven't really tried photo manips either so not sure how hard it is. xD

+Tequila+ · 04-17-2008, 07:38 AM

Originally Posted by Yosei

The eyes look too shopped lol.

I'm guessing you're trying to turn her eyes green?

hmm I wanted her eyes to have a really shopped look to them..its hard to explain what I'm aimin for haha.

Originally Posted by Flowersss

So much better...I like this one 50 time better. She dosent look dead anymore ^_^

ty ty!

hehe didnt want to double post..so umm edit! Tried a different technique with the eyes and a different color.