For one thing, the render/stock doesn't match or blend with the background at all. It could also contrast more. Nothing stands out much. Maybe you could fix the lighting and play with filters and blending. At its current state, it's bland.
The text could still use work, and the scanlines really take away from it. You would do much better with them. I still think you should do something to the stock/render, too.
Not to sound harsh, but I find this one a step down from the old one.