Criticism needed/wanted ^.^

[+Tequila+]

*Pay no attention to the black background and the size i am still working on it ^.^*

hmmm so im doin a photo-manip style siggy and am wondering if someone wouldnt mind critiquein it for me while i do it . Any comments/opinions would be really appreciated. If some people or someone can give me a opinion on the eyes and the butterflies it would really help me out.

*The original so you have a idea of what I have done to it.*




*Pay close attention to the eyes and the butterfly*

[MikeyG]

I dont understand it ... is tat supposed to be what u
would look like with a tatoo or something o.0

[+Tequila+]

lol no >.> im doin a tag and wanted a opinion on what i was doin lol....>.> its photo manipulation.

[Hessah]

somehow the butterfly on the cheek doesnt look like its curving with the face......?

but i dont hv artistic eyes...

[Loveless]

First off, she's really purdy! Lol

Something that sort of bugs me is how she sort of seems like a zombie with the faded colours. >_< I guess it's cause of the original.

And her right eye (your left), the blue is a little off the iris so it's covering a bit of her eyelid too.

The tip of the butterflies wing is touching her lips and gives the impression of 'the Joker' with the slit mouth thing.

[+Tequila+]

somehow the butterfly on the cheek doesnt look like its curving with the face......?

but i dont hv artistic eyes...

hmm you are probably right haha I'm semi blind when it comes to making things flow together.

First off, she's really purdy! Lol

Something that sort of bugs me is how she sort of seems like a zombie with the faded colours. >_< I guess it's cause of the original.

And her right eye (your left), the blue is a little off the iris so it's covering a bit of her eyelid too.

The tip of the butterflies wing is touching her lips and gives the impression of 'the Joker' with the slit mouth thing.

Yea she is o.0 Misa Campo ftw. I had faded her a bit because I wanted the butterflies to stand out more but if it looks bad then its something I can always change. Thank you for the butterfly part something seemed off and when i resized it everything seemed to fit better. ^.^

[Yosei]

I like the colors in the original better. She looks pale in the 2nd one.

[Loveless]

I'm sure you can utilize her purdy glow and still have the butterfly standout. :3 But seriously her facial structure is super nice... :O


Off-topic: My dog is doing her usual 'butt drag race'. xD

[+Tequila+]

Still too pale? I also did somemore work on the eyes and resized the butterfly. As for the colors I dont think the original colors would work well with the eyes however but I'm trying it.

[a.L]

I think her right eye needs a little fixing. Maybe tone down the brightness a little. I've never done photo manip before, so don't take my word for it. :/