Frankly, my only concern is that this is supposed to be 13 year old friendly & while the humor resembled middle school humor, it's still not appropriate. Thanks to whoever fixed it.
Oh & it may not be mature, but I couldn't help but laugh at it anyways. It just reminded of some of the cheap humor we used to bandy around as kids trying to sound cool. The kid who edited it was probably like 10 years old.
