It's a decent effort. It's good that your language is straightforward and easy to comprehend, but your organisation of the information is offputting.
It'd be nice if you had clear and distinguised subheadings for your guide. e.g. "What is an academy," "Joining an academy," "Leaving an academy," "Tips to ensure you join a good academy" etc.
Also, point number 9 isn't really a point.
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