[Lirange]

very good;O(
but you made some errors

Beside her was her friend, Yuki Batosi.

You make straight A’s for the ‘for the love Nature’ stop acting like you’re going to flunk.”

and you should have paragraphs, that way it is easier to read
and at the end of the prologue, it said she disappeared with kaiki, who kaiki? Did i miss a part? But other then that very good. Very curious on what is goign to happen.

edit: and what does the title neguma mean? just a random word? or another language

Btw, if you want me to delete this so you can put next chapter then just ask.