Originally Posted by Jikanu
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Real paragraph:
"my father's family name being Pirrip, and my Christian name being "Philip", my infant tongue could make of both names nothing longer or more expicit than Pip. So, i called myself Pip and came to be called Pip."
The same could be said for this paragraph, but in a much less discriptive way:
"When i was a baby, it was hard for me to say my first or last name. I could only say "Pip" in refference to myself. So i called myself that, and people called me that."
that's more descriptive than the one i posted first, and a less dramatic way of making my point. Which of the two paragraphs do you prefer?
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First.
Yes, it is more descriptive. But, in other words, it has the
right amount of descriptiveness.
Now, can you imagine someone writing a paragraph twice as long as that with more fancy words, but pretty much saying the same thing?
I find that people often try to be
too descriptive and start repeating the same things over and over. Not saying any entries were, I don't think they were, but it sometimes happen.
Like I said, it depends on
how you do it. When I said 'having lots of descriptive words =/= better quality', that's what I mean.
Anyway, long stories are good. But short stories are
also good. Having someone write a story in 200-300 words is too short, of course. But a length of 600-800 words isn't unreasonably demanding for short story "challenge", imo.