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lamchopz · 04-23-2009, 01:36 AM

I personally also liked #3 and #4. I would have voted for either of them if it had been a bit longer (not for the sake of length) but delivered a bit more insight into the plot. With that said, none of the entries really told me why she was bleeding in the first place. =/

#4 did hint at the cause and it would be my pick if it were a bit more descriptive about the situation.

EDIT: About the word count: possibly, and just possibly, not a good idea because it limits imagination and inhibits the flow of one's writing. As this is a creative piece, not argumentative or scientific, an upper word limit would not be desirable.

04-23-2009, 01:36 AM	#34
lamchopz Goblin Swordman In-Game Name: yummy Current Level: skewl Posts: 463	I personally also liked #3 and #4. I would have voted for either of them if it had been a bit longer (not for the sake of length) but delivered a bit more insight into the plot. With that said, none of the entries really told me why she was bleeding in the first place. =/ #4 did hint at the cause and it would be my pick if it were a bit more descriptive about the situation. EDIT: About the word count: possibly, and just possibly, not a good idea because it limits imagination and inhibits the flow of one's writing. As this is a creative piece, not argumentative or scientific, an upper word limit would not be desirable. __________________ ------------------------------------------------- Primum non nocere ------------------------------------------------- Last edited by lamchopz; 04-23-2009 at 01:43 AM..