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Old 04-03-2009, 03:22 AM   #4
lamchopz
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@Jik: Thanks. ^^

But... that's it. The passage ends along with his life. lol

@Yos: This short passage is meant to be a series of frames of the past and present intertwined. They are distinguished in the tenses used. The mood that was set out follows the rhythm of the protagonist's trail of thoughts.

And no, the victims are not the same because he stabbed his first victim with a knife whereas he shot the officer later on.

The second paragraph describes the beginning of his murderous path and the following one depicts its conclusion.

The end of the passage immediately precedes his execution.

Hope it helps. =]
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