[Phantom Badger]

I thought I would point out some mistakes for you
By seeing them...hmm are you German? D: German nouns are in capital letters...I was wondering if that was why you put many of the words in caps xP

Well it's always nicer to have a corrected version of things
I wish it was more gory!



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And you know the rest You could go over it
I love the description of the beast Allows me to imagine it quite easily in my head.
Waiting for gorier works from you >

Noes Im not german ;-; I'm English
And Thanks ! I'm proud of my descriptive ability >D

And once I eventually finish the first draft I'll go over it all and make it less....random

i don't even want to look at it. LOL

btw, when is the next chapter coming along, DragonEX?

I've done up to chapter 10, I cant really be bothered writing much of Chapter 11 since I'm getting cought up in Fiesta, Phoenix wright (so addictive), school, etc.

But if anyone wants to read the story so far PM me your e-mail adress and Ill send you the chapters !