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bloodrops · 11-11-2008, 06:26 PM

When I was first finished with this...about a week ago, I was pretty pleased with it. And now that I look at it again...I don't really like it...What could be the reason? D: Maybe it's the chin X(
Criticisms are very welcome...D: I need them

11-11-2008, 06:26 PM	#1
bloodrops Weakened Ogre In-Game Name: Vividia Current Level: 56/37/53/ Server: Teva <3 Posts: 512	-> Criticisms: I don't know :S When I was first finished with this...about a week ago, I was pretty pleased with it. And now that I look at it again...I don't really like it...What could be the reason? D: Maybe it's the chin X( Criticisms are very welcome...D: I need them __________________ Comatose-Skillet <3 You're touch is what i'm missing And the more I hide I realize I'm slowly losing You Comatose I'll never wake up without an overdose of You I don't wanna live, I dont wanna breathe 'Les I feel you next to me You take the pain I feel Waking up to You never felt so real I don't wanna sleep, I don't wanna dream 'Cause my dreams don't comfort me The way You make me feel Waking up to You never felt so real Last edited by bloodrops; 11-11-2008 at 06:54 PM..