[koager]

I say 2nd one also
for the first one I don't think sloppy is the word, maybe pixelated?
It's a thin font and also rotated thus the black stroke around the text became pixelated and doesn't look clean
but yes I think I like the placement of the 1st one like Loveless said and also on the 2nd one the names on top aren't parallel with the text on the bottom, its slanted downwards a little (heavy on the right), unless it's suppose to be like that

art school is too expensive for me T.T