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Old 05-28-2008, 05:16 PM   #8
bloodrops
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hmm the poem seems too direct...:/ but otherwise, i think it's good...if I got the meaning right :P
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You're touch is what i'm missing
And the more I hide I realize I'm slowly losing You
Comatose
I'll never wake up without an overdose of You
I don't wanna live, I dont wanna breathe
'Les I feel you next to me
You take the pain I feel
Waking up to You never felt so real
I don't wanna sleep, I don't wanna dream
'Cause my dreams don't comfort me
The way You make me feel
Waking up to You never felt so real

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