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For the 2nd edit pic:
Her right eye needs to be adjusted, it looks like she lost pupils. Another thing that makes it look weird is the lining on the top of the right eye. It doesn't seem to be smoothly lined so it looks like the eyeball is popping out.
Maybe you can also try lightly shade her right face (our left) so there's a bit more of a contrast.
I think the outlines of her eyes are a little bit too dark too.
That's just what I reckon, I haven't really tried photo manips either so not sure how hard it is. xD
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