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Hazu 05-01-2008 02:25 AM

ShortStory/Poem
 
Okay in Honors World Lit, we have to do journals like everyday. We had alot of Free writes and sometimes I write like 2 pages worth of stuff I want to do with making a wolf refuge... goals in KeyClub... obsession with Keyclub... plans for a book im writing. But I decided to write a short story and a poem in two of them.

The poem
I've walked this path
for many years
The trees are dead and rotten
the dirt as black as night
I walk this path in sorrow
as I have for many years.

Today someone's path joined mine
an old friend from long ago
I smiled at him and he at me
as we walked our new path
-Hand in hand.

Now I look back on that day
when he saved me from myself and I saved him
We both had take the wrong path at a fork in life
I just know if that last path we had taken a different one
we would both walk alone forever
But I see now the chanced was wort it in the end.


The Short Story

(I edit it when i find I find it in my journal... having trouble locating it)

beijmanli 05-22-2008 03:42 PM

A good book
 
-edited-

05-22-2008 05:00 PM

nice poem =D

Hazu 05-22-2008 10:22 PM

^^ thanks~

Flowersss 05-23-2008 01:30 AM

I LOVE IT! :D

off topic: I wanna eat your avvy :D its so cute!

Aryia 05-23-2008 11:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flowersss (Post 150359)

off topic: I wanna eat your avvy :D its so cute!

LOL flowersss =p

Hazu 05-27-2008 02:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flowersss (Post 150359)
off topic: I wanna eat your avvy :D its so cute!


*scoots away slowly and changs avvy*

bloodrops 05-28-2008 05:16 PM

hmm the poem seems too direct...:/ but otherwise, i think it's good...if I got the meaning right :P


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