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Hazu 08-26-2008 02:52 AM

[Poem] (I suck at titleing things...)
 
When I cry I see it as a weakness
When others cry I see it as a strength
They let themselves go
Instead of holding it in.
The sadness the pain
they let it flow down their cheeks.
Yet I hold it in
wanting to be strong only ending up being weak.

I dont let you know how much I love you
yet others are able to say it so easily.

I hide in a cornor within myself.
Afraid to walk into the light of the world.
Scared of the denial of others, the stares, the jokes.
Thinking even a compliment might reach out and strike.

Though I want you to know
the love that I feel.
Maybe someday I'll be strong.
And I'll prove that my love for you is greater than my fear.































.-. I was bored........... I know it kinds sucks XD but.. yeah..... <3

Kaidela 08-26-2008 07:14 PM

Wow, very nice. :O And only one error!~

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hazu (Post 217893)
I hide in a corner within myself.


lamchopz 08-27-2008 04:11 AM

I would love it even more if it rhymed. :D

Hazu 08-27-2008 12:33 PM

:3 Rhyiming poems get on my nerves after a while
(also was too lazy to think of rhyming words at the time :x)

^_______^

Yami 08-27-2008 12:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kaidela (Post 218235)
Wow, very nice. :O And only one error!~

Lmao, spelling/grammar whaor!


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