I wrote a poem...
Please tell me what you think of it, if you read it:
Death's Silent Spectre Silently through the door, Death barges in, An entity of silence, a creator of the din. Discriminating not, between the Old and the Young Lives are simply his playthings; a little boy having fun. The car wreck, killing a mother of two, The young boy falling to his death at the zoo So listen, dear children, both young and old, For what i shall tell you simply must be told. While, when you'll die, there's no way to tell, True love in life breaks the chains of that Hell. For if love is infinite, why not too the Soul? Not all will disappear into Death's dark hole. So fear not death, simply hate and strife for the only true death is that of a wasted life. |
I see someone is also in the mood for poetry. I've been reading Yeats's (yes, Yeats's, not Yeats' or Yeat's) collection of poems. They're great.
I like the poem. Is it your first attempt? |
^That's how I like to punctuate it too.
Also, the correct way, IIRC |
I like it.
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I love it.
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also, i have some more poems too. if you want me to post one, i'd be happy to. :D Never heard of Yeats... but my personal favorite is deffinitely Poe. thanks for the compliments you guys :D |
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Im not too well studied in poems. i just recently started getting into them, hrae. Not a name i hear often... and sadly my school's english program focuses more on us reading pointless short stories than anything with actual value. Luckily, we DID get a few gems this year, but not nearly as many as i would've wanted. (the only exceptions i can think of is "The Tell Tale Heart", one of ray bradbury short stories, and two of the short novels she had us read as a class...)
...Why is it that the only time you post in my threads is to belittle me, or whatever i support? o_O |
Wow very nice!
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Some short stories are awesome D:
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