Don't jump
My first attempt at poetry. Could be a faliure but at least, I tried. lol
I was listening to the song "Don't jump" by Tokio Hotel and had this vivid image that compelled me to draw it out in words. ================== Scene: on top of the roof -------------------------- Winds of memory. Kiss from yesterday. Our breaths were sewn together Our lips were sealed forever. The night that was fate. Then the night that came too late. Your body lay there in my arms, wet with my own tears. Guns echoed through the alleyway. A life of crime ended that day. This same hour a month from then, I step towards the moon to catch the glimmers of your hand. My feet lift from this ground of the world so broken, to find the peace never spoken and the soul that was my lost half. With the wind I ride, in your love that I confide. Out of this darkness, I will see the light of you and me. Together, we shall be. |
10/10 I like it and it gives alot of imagry which helps tell the story of the poem.
Lol if thats your first attempt.. you did amazingly ^.^ I hope you write more~ |
Nice.
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