My English Poem~ (DONE!) ;3
 

Forenotes:
-Hayes = My High School.
-Written Iambic Pentameter~ Iambic = Unstressed, Stressed; Pentameter = 5 lengths. Iambic Pentameter = 5 lengths of unstressed, stressed sylables.
-Rhyme Pattern = AA BB CC DD EE FF
-Double entendres. (Say one thing, but you mean sex.)
-Project is 5 Stanzas of 10 lines each, but if you write more than that, you get 10 bonus points for each stanza.
-Each stanza changes from one point of the story to the other.
-First stanza is opening/char intro/foreshadow

:3

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tabbbIn Hayes there was two groups of lovers two,
They had insight on what the others do.
Two boys, two girls, of which their lives combine,
Just when the bell had sang its song at nine.
One pair begins at one side of the school,
A boy, a girl, prepared to act the fool.
The other story starts from after Gym,
A wicked plan she hoped to pleasure him.
Too bad things don't go always as they're planned,
For they won't get to take it hand-in-hand.
tabbbA couple started on the stairs in back,
They thought that they would have a heart attack.
For when the bell had rang for class to end,
They knew there would be no more time to spend
'a-studying anatomy for class,
They knew that this behaviour was quite krass.
So then she quickly grabbed him by his hand,
And started making good out of her plan.
Her first thought was to lead him to woodshop,
Where she would take a feel they call a "cop"
tabbbThe others start in front of room Kinnard (Teacher's name)
This couple knew this act of theirs is hard,
To get themselves to destination one,
For they were both intent on having fun.
He knew his wishes, knew where he would call,
This girl of his into the bathroom stall.
The day for him surely included suck,
and 'o for him, his life had not such luck.
But 'twas this suck that made his life feel blocked,
For when time came, they found the bathroom locked.
tabbbSo Girl A, Boy A these were names to be,
Were on their way to get some liberty.
When something happened to her mind, like of
A reminiscence of a past time love.
She stared upon the door of the dark room,
Yes it had filled her life with certain gloom.
To think of her time with another boy,
She could not keep her mind off of his toy.
And with this thought that filled her with pure bliss,
She thought of him, oh how she had him missed.
tabbb"Oh come with me," said Guy, "and you will see,
That we will surely have some privacy!"
And so they left, content with his plan B,
That they were heading towards the library.
"Make haste! For now the time has come,
be quick! Come now before they will be done!"
And so like rabbits, off to section of,
Who cares?! He reached and grabbed his rubber glove.
God only knows what were his thoughts of next,
But what he saw did make him quite complexed.
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After that is extra credit, and I'll be writing it...

but this is enough for a day =/

This is all due in 2 1/2 weeks. xD

~Next 90 Extra Credit Points~
tabbbNow back to group A, where we last left off
"I think it's time to play doctor, now cough!
I'm really worried that you might be sick,
Just take a look! Oh my! It's not that thick."
It was supposed to be a perfect fling,
But now she saw that only he could bring
The happiness that she wanted in life
Oh how she longed for him to call her "wife".
She took a step back, said, "Look, I'm sorry.
I think I have to get back and study."
tabbbWhat Guy had seen could simply be called fear,
For her to be here that was just quite queer!
He didn't give the thought another pass,
Instead he'd go into another class!
Not A, not B, so they were off, Plan C!
It seemed his life was such a tragedy.
How ever will he be able to come
To save his pants from bursting from this run?
Where he was going he did not divulge,
But when he looked down he could see a bulge.
tabbbShe was so lonely, searching endlessly,
Until she wandered past the library.
She caught a glance, and went out on a whim,
"Could this be it? Could this be really him?!"
But then he fled, off like the morning fog,
Her inquisition made her quickly jog
Around the corner, down the hall, upstairs.
"He wouldn't do this if he really cares."
And like a mouse who's traced back to a crumb,
She landed there in front of room Uppstrom. (<- My Lit Teacher :3)
tabbbGuy looked at her, said, "I know where you'll lay"
Inside the room of good 'ole G.S.A!"
And so they ran, there was no time to groom
For he wanted her now inside the room
Guy lay upon the door a giant slam
He knew his trojan and him had a plan.
Alas there was no time left there to spend
He looked at her and wanted her to bend
Over, backwards so he could use his spear,
They heard a footstep, knew it sha'nt be here.
tabbbA knock upon the door of room Uppstrom
She knew that they could not have been that dumb.
She pressed her ear to listen for a sound,
But was not disappointed to have found
Nothing to hear but other than the air.
This showed to her that truly he did care!
If he wanted to play a game with her,
This thought did make her loins begin to stir.
And off she was to find her mystery,
The first to check were rooms of history.
tabbbGuy was so sad his plans were not yet done,
They simply wanted just a little fun!
He once was told the perfect place to hide
"Sit in the open! Leave yourself outside!"
And while he was there to heed advice
Hie life fancied a little bit of spice.
Guy quickly thought of his kind of a game,
To make her his, for she was there to tame!
"Now how about we play some quick Twister?
We could head in to see Mr. Spitzer." <- My Econ Teacher :3
tabbbShe peeked into the windows to find him
Although her chances she knew were quite slim
And as she walked looking from left to right
She heard a noise that gave her a big fright
A leap quickly upon the window sill
To see his hand insider her lacy frill
"I must stop this before it goes too far!
He knows this groping will destroy my heart."
The actions unfolding did make her cringe
So she kicked that door off its little hinge.
tabbbGuy saw as soon as she came barging in
He tested her patience and made it thin.
The words "True love" were said, but nothing more
He looked down deeper, looked into his core,
"I know you've seen me, know that's what I do,
But I must tell you, I truly love you!
I'm sorry for the things that I have done,
And I promise you'll be my only one."
Guy grinned as he walked out the door with her,
His lie had worked, he made her feel secure.
tabbbAnd so what started as two lover two,
Did find each other in love that was true
She knew he would be with her all her life.
He knew he would be with her until strife.
For her she knew true love was hard to find.
For him he had sex always on his mind.
And in the end we did learn to infer,
That love is different for him and her.
She had her love! There was no room to pout
And Guy was happy that his plans made out.

/FIN!

Done!

Comments?

:3

Holy.............

That can be good...

can be bad?

=/

/nervös.

I got dizzy after reading the first 10 stanza. I dont understand poetry language anyway xD

I read it. I got it. ...

Yeah you kinda have to be a language nerd to get it :3

Oh... ähm...

Good? Bad? what?! D:

Too much sex?

=/

You can never have too much of that.

Uhh. I'm 14 -nods- I may know many things but no sex in my life is good at my age LOL

D:

ohmahgawd D:

Sorry dear =/

So wow...

yeah I should put like a warning tag on all my posts >.>;

Ahahaha. This poem is nothing. I've talked about worse things, to be honest{Err. This poem isn't bad though O_o}. xD Sex is apart of life, lol.

You made me feel bad for nothing =/

but yeah I was gonna say at 14 I know guys are already wayyyyyy into that xD

And for my poem I made the storyline... then worked all the sex in around the story...

you should read the other people's... they suck... miserably.

And the teacher has already refused like 4 groups' poems because they have no story to them...

it's all stupid like "I like to eat juicy sausage in the back of the car..."

it's so...

stupid >.>

At 14 guys are already wayyyy into it? LMFAO. Seriously. The guys at my school are soo sooooooo stupid -.- Immature little pricks. They listen to rap and think they know everything. Some of them haven't hit puberty and all they do is talk about how a certain girl or girls are hot. God they're dumb. Ugh. I want to rip most of their faces off, put it back on and rip it off again...

You know my favourite thing I've heard?

"YOUR MOTHER STILL DRIVES YOU TO SCHOOL... YOU ARE NOT A GANGSTA... PULL YOUR PANTS UP!"

xD!

And wow...

violence ftw :3

Ehh. They all think their gangster D:


I know. I seem so nice coughcough

You do! xD

but you're not?

D:

I've always thought you were.

I can be a real bitch =\ Yeah yeah yeah. Everyone can be at times. But its different with me xD

I snap. Nice one second and then someone will say or do something and I just snap. Never gotten a detention or anything like that but still D:
^That doesn't really explain me either though...

Uhh. Anyways. Nice poem @_@

You are...

something else dear ;)

xD

Thanks for the kudos :p

Holy.....

Dude, I'd love to be in your world for at least 10 seconds.

^Wth does that mean?

D:

xD

Well, your poem is awesome, and so is your imagination, so I'd like to see the world as you see it. Get it? :D

Ah my mind...

I <3 it so :3

And the world to me...

is just one big challenge after another...

but if you just look at it exactly like that,

you can overcome any of those challenges ;3

The President/CEO of Made From Scratch, Inc (Catering Company) told me:

"Success is easy if you put your mind to it, because barely anyone really tries."

So yeah...

:p

And if you didn't wanna read all that...

if you wanna see my world, take acid, then tell me what you see! xD

JKJKJK xDDD

*don't do drugs* >.>;

Oooh, look at all the pretty colours!

XD

Please tell me you are gonna write more.

awwwww... do I have to?

xD

But if you want... as soon as I'm done with this other stuffs...

you want me to make a new storyline, or just continue this one?

:3

Lol, no you don't. But you have skill, I'll admit that.

BTW, how did your teacher react to it?

Ha I wanna write more to be honest... but it was due 2nd period today... I thought I would have another week, then I realized I looked at the calendar wrong =/

and she LOVES it xD

I'm getting 290/125 on it xD