The Story of the Dead Children
 

You have all probobly seen this House in elderine. It has No doors. none at all.

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Well, In the olden Times when Elderine and roumen were still alive That House was used by an Evil Being. At night when all the children were sleeping it would search the streets of elderine and roumen and take children, One from each house.
The being would then come back to this house and lock the children away inside. once all the children were there The evil being Sealed the House so they could not escape. A year passed. Many people heard the children screaming to be let our but they could not find a way in.

Then Suddenly The Clock hit Midnight and one of the voices screeched violently and then all was quiet. Each day for the next 13 days the evil being would return at the strike of Midnight and kill another child in unspeakable and horrific ways.


And even today. if you listen carefully. You can still hear them scream:

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Bahaahhahahahahaha!!!

=d

R...o...f...l...

Meh, I was bored XD

I gotta leave in 18mins

... Ummmm Okay ? (thats kinds offtopic XD)

very creative lol =)

Thanks ^^

Well, back on topic. Secbro said that the stroy was horrible. Not as in wow you suck at making things up but as in what happens in it xD

XD I made it up on the spot so im not surprised its horribe (well what do you expect from someone who suggested this to stop an annoying cousain:

That is pretty awful. At least its not true, we hope X.X

Not MoS here, so we can't really spam. xD


I LOL'ed at the last pic though. Hahaha!

The screams aren't dramatic enough. D:

that's pretty cool keke

am i suppose to find it funny or freaky at the end? if the faces look more like :eek: i'll find it freaky!

Well what could I add XD If someone rescued the kids there would be a door or a hole where they got out

My internet had died so I Had to live with the 3 screenshots I had taken

XD Im not sure if I could do that. Also im not sure if its funny or freaky


Well I didnt say those things did I ? So someone must have

So noone will ever come resue the children? Oh sad. What if a good-being was to have come and rescued the children, defeated the evil-being, and then sealed the house back up so that noone could ever enter it again?
That would explain the no hole or door theory.

Because. i AM the evil Being >D

Then I am the good-being and you are now banished from Isya. Go away and leave all the innocent children alone or fear the rath of SPIRIT!!!!!

Umm this was set in the past. The kids are already dead and im retired XD

Why you bring up the past? Let it stay in the past. And if you retired, why you still here?

Because I dont have enough money for a Taxi

D: I cant think of an ending

What about your flying dog?

He has worms, Flying Worms
So he is at the vet

LMAO, where do you come up with this stuff?

and I thought you left Montka and went to Rush?

My brain is like a virus, Good stuff liek schoolwork goes in. and random weirdo stuff comes out.

Yup then I quit rush and went to Montka because all the people in Rush were only on reeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyy late for me (because of time differance)

Many years pass and most citizens forgot the horrors of that dark time when IchigoHollow haunted the once peaceful streets of Elderine. Parents stopped telling their children of the tragic happenings for fear of causing nightmares and insecurity. Children stopped avoiding the house and stopped crossing to the other side as they passed.

Oh, every now and then someone would mention it, but the horrors benefited from so many urban legends being passed around that for the most part the stories were discounted and just another urban legend. All but one child, the beautiful adventurous young Loki. Loki knew there was something about that house. Something sinister. She could never quite put her finger on it, but it was there. Oh, definitely there. She felt its presence every time she flew her hobby horse past that house with no doors. Loki felt it so strongly that she did cross to the other side of the street as she went past it.

She didn’t know what it was or why it was but she felt as if the house was watching her. But how? How can a house watch you? Could it be those shuttered windows? Oh yes, those shuttered windows were watching like a cats slanted eyes. Sitting so still and waiting for its prey. She knew there was no logical explanation but she knew it was. She felt the cold pass through her bones like an arctic wind. Cold. Sharp. Heartless. She felt the hairs on her neck stand up. She felt a sense of foreboding.

But even as she scurried past as fast as her hobby would fly her adventuresome spirit wondered what was actually in that house. That house in Elderine with no doors. But that house had eyes! Shuttered they may look, but they saw. And she knew; she knew as well as she knew Captain Shutain would refuse her the Gold Bug 3 reward, that one day she would know.


(KK – if no one else puts some serious storytelling into it I will try to continue it laterz . . .)

It does have winows but they have shutters on them *points at top of the house*
Ill try to continue but im bad at stories

Part 2

And one day, On her way to turn in her quest to Captain Shutain Spirit Heard a Voice. "H...HH...H Help M...Me" She turned around, It was then she noticed that elderine was practically empty. Spirit followed the voice and arrived at the House. She called out "Hello ?" But there was no reply.
"I must be hearing things" She muttered. And Spirit walked to the Captain to turn in the quest.
The next morning spirit walked up to her Mohter Loki. After having a sleepless night full of nightmares, She told her Mother what had happened.

Loki's eyes widened in Horror. "Whats wrong Mom ? It was probobly my Imagination anyway." Spirit Asked
"Well," Loki Started "I didnt want to tell you this but, Children have started to Dissapear again." Spirit stumbled back in Fright.

IchigoHollow.... Was Back.

Its okay, well pretend they are just painted on....

OKAY ^^

we gotta make a new thread and put this all together once its finished.

SOMEONE CONTINUE

If not then Ill try to do more later