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Phantom Badger 01-07-2008 02:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Spirit (Post 66669)
Then I am the good-being and you are now banished from Isya. Go away and leave all the innocent children alone or fear the rath of SPIRIT!!!!!

Umm this was set in the past. The kids are already dead and im retired XD

Spirit 01-07-2008 02:45 PM

Why you bring up the past? Let it stay in the past. And if you retired, why you still here?

Phantom Badger 01-07-2008 02:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Spirit (Post 66675)
Why you bring up the past? Let it stay in the past. And if you retired, why you still here?

Because I dont have enough money for a Taxi

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Originally Posted by Lady-Loki (Post 66667)
B& for altering Fiesta buildings and harassing Fiesta citizens!

Oh, and for leaving us hanging with a news blurb rather than a full story. :(


D: I cant think of an ending

Spirit 01-07-2008 02:47 PM

What about your flying dog?

Phantom Badger 01-07-2008 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Spirit (Post 66678)
What about your flying dog?

He has worms, Flying Worms
So he is at the vet

Spirit 01-07-2008 02:56 PM

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Originally Posted by BlackDragonEX (Post 66680)
He has worms, Flying Worms
So he is at the vet

LMAO, where do you come up with this stuff?

and I thought you left Montka and went to Rush?

Phantom Badger 01-07-2008 02:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Spirit (Post 66685)
LMAO, where do you come up with this stuff?

and I thought you left Montka and went to Rush?

My brain is like a virus, Good stuff liek schoolwork goes in. and random weirdo stuff comes out.

Yup then I quit rush and went to Montka because all the people in Rush were only on reeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyy late for me (because of time differance)

Lady-Loki 01-07-2008 03:15 PM

Many years pass and most citizens forgot the horrors of that dark time when IchigoHollow haunted the once peaceful streets of Elderine. Parents stopped telling their children of the tragic happenings for fear of causing nightmares and insecurity. Children stopped avoiding the house and stopped crossing to the other side as they passed.

Oh, every now and then someone would mention it, but the horrors benefited from so many urban legends being passed around that for the most part the stories were discounted and just another urban legend. All but one child, the beautiful adventurous young Loki. Loki knew there was something about that house. Something sinister. She could never quite put her finger on it, but it was there. Oh, definitely there. She felt its presence every time she flew her hobby horse past that house with no doors. Loki felt it so strongly that she did cross to the other side of the street as she went past it.

She didn’t know what it was or why it was but she felt as if the house was watching her. But how? How can a house watch you? Could it be those shuttered windows? Oh yes, those shuttered windows were watching like a cats slanted eyes. Sitting so still and waiting for its prey. She knew there was no logical explanation but she knew it was. She felt the cold pass through her bones like an arctic wind. Cold. Sharp. Heartless. She felt the hairs on her neck stand up. She felt a sense of foreboding.

But even as she scurried past as fast as her hobby would fly her adventuresome spirit wondered what was actually in that house. That house in Elderine with no doors. But that house had eyes! Shuttered they may look, but they saw. And she knew; she knew as well as she knew Captain Shutain would refuse her the Gold Bug 3 reward, that one day she would know.


(KK – if no one else puts some serious storytelling into it I will try to continue it laterz . . .)

Phantom Badger 01-07-2008 03:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Lady-Loki (Post 66697)
Many years pass and most citizens forgot the horrors of that dark time when IchigoHollow haunted the once peaceful streets of Elderine. Parents stopped telling their children of the tragic happenings for fear of causing nightmares and insecurity. Children stopped avoiding the house and stopped crossing to the other side as they passed.

Oh, every now and then someone would mention it, but the horrors benefited from so many urban legends being passed around that for the most part the stories were discounted and just another urban legend. All but one child, the beautiful adventurous young Loki. Loki knew there was something about that house. Something sinister. She could never quite put her finger on it, but it was there. Oh, definitely there. She felt its presence every time she flew her hobby horse past that house with no windows or doors. Loki felt it so strongly that she did cross to the other side of the street as she went past it.

She didn’t know what it was or why it was but she felt as if the house was watching her. But how? How can a house watch you? Especially a house with no windows for eyes? She knew there was no logical explanation but she knew it was. She felt the cold pass through her bones like an arctic wind. Cold. Sharp. Heartless. She felt the hairs on her neck stand up. She felt a sense of foreboding.

But even as she scurried past as fast as her hobby would fly her adventuresome spirit wondered what was actually in that house. That house in Elderine with no windows or doors. That house that had eyes that no one saw. And she knew; she knew as well as she knew Captain Shutain would refuse her the Gold Bug 3 reward, that one day she would know.

(KK – if no one else puts some serious storytelling into it I will try to continue it laterz . . .)


It does have winows but they have shutters on them *points at top of the house*
Ill try to continue but im bad at stories

Part 2

And one day, On her way to turn in her quest to Captain Shutain Spirit Heard a Voice. "H...HH...H Help M...Me" She turned around, It was then she noticed that elderine was practically empty. Spirit followed the voice and arrived at the House. She called out "Hello ?" But there was no reply.
"I must be hearing things" She muttered. And Spirit walked to the Captain to turn in the quest.
The next morning spirit walked up to her Mohter Loki. After having a sleepless night full of nightmares, She told her Mother what had happened.

Loki's eyes widened in Horror. "Whats wrong Mom ? It was probobly my Imagination anyway." Spirit Asked
"Well," Loki Started "I didnt want to tell you this but, Children have started to Dissapear again." Spirit stumbled back in Fright.

IchigoHollow.... Was Back.

Lady-Loki 01-07-2008 03:27 PM

Well h3ll! Now I gotta do a whole re-write.

Thinks . . .

Thinks . . .

Thinks . . .

Thinks me will get back to you later.


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