The eyes look too shopped lol.

I'm guessing you're trying to turn her eyes green?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../MisaCampo.jpg

So much better...I like this one 50 time better. She dosent look dead anymore ^_^

For the 2nd edit pic:

Her right eye needs to be adjusted, it looks like she lost pupils. Another thing that makes it look weird is the lining on the top of the right eye. It doesn't seem to be smoothly lined so it looks like the eyeball is popping out.

Maybe you can also try lightly shade her right face (our left) so there's a bit more of a contrast.

I think the outlines of her eyes are a little bit too dark too.

That's just what I reckon, I haven't really tried photo manips either so not sure how hard it is. xD

hmm I wanted her eyes to have a really shopped look to them..its hard to explain what I'm aimin for haha.
ty ty!

hehe didnt want to double post..so umm edit! Tried a different technique with the eyes and a different color.
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...MisaStart3.png

*shudders*

Okay now she creeps me out. Try blue for eyes and make it look like water.

the pink looked a lot better than the green

i think the problem with the green was her right eye ball looked like it popped out... and the pink one it sits back into her eye LOL

both colour looks good! but i think the pink one looks a lil bit more "natural"

Pink works heaps better.

I have to agree with everything that everyone has said so far. THe third is the best so far, even with the pinkish/purplish eyes. But, if you are not going for natural eye-color then that doesn't matter. The butterflies look a lot better after you adjusted them and so does her color. However, what is it that youare wanting to draw people's eyes to on their first look? Because you had said that you faded her coloring to bring the butterflies out, but with you adjusting her eye color so drastically, that is the first thing my eyes have been drawn to and the butterflies kinda get lost.

The pink ones look better, but perhaps a different color?